Anna Graham

I don't know what it is, but I really like this poem! It's definitely original, which gives it a kind of potency and makes the reader curious. It's a common ...

I agree! This piece makes me want to jump up and smack that owner, then go help the animals. You portrayed the idea well. There are a few small things ...

I just wanted to say: Wow! I love it! I love the imagery, the rhythm, the rhyme, and your wide range of words. You keep us interested without rushing, and ...

Hey jasmine12! I think you've got a great thing going here. It's an interesting plot, and I'd love to read more. There are a few things I've noticed, though. You ...

I really like it! You described the ocean perfectly, in my eyes. I especially liked the line "Serenity is found in crashing waves." Beautiful. It's great as an opening line. ...

I completely agree! You include some great synonyms that really add to the piece and help put across the main idea. There are a few rough spots, but all in ...

You've got some good advice here. All I can say is that it seems to me you're bouncing around a little. It made it confusing and difficult to follow your ...

I gotta say, this poem was perfect for me. You've managed to write something I've been trying to convey for a long time! Thanks! As for the ugly thing, you're ...